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High-voltage direct current transmission has moved from a niche engineering solution to a central instrument of large-scale grid decarbonisation. Offshore wind aggregation, long-distance renewable integration, and synchronous-zone interconnection all depend on HVDC corridors that cross multiple regulatory jurisdictions. Yet the governance architecture surrounding these assets has not kept pace with their physical deployment. Cost allocation between beneficiary states, revenue recovery under merchant or regulated models, and the assignment of system operator responsibilities across borders remain contested in both European and East Asian contexts. The result is a set of projects that are technically mature but institutionally stalled: interconnectors that can be built but whose regulatory settlement is unresolved. This proposal asks a bounded question: under what conditions do cross-border HVDC projects achieve a durable regulatory settlement, and which governance design features are most consistently associated with that outcome? The question is tractable within an MPhil timeframe because it is comparative rather than predictive, and because the documentary record for a defined set of projects is accessible through public regulatory filings, ENTSO-E network development plans, and equivalent materials from the Northeast Asian context. The project is organised around three linked questions. First, what regulatory models—merchant, regulated asset base, or hybrid—have been applied to cross-border HVDC interconnectors in Europe and Northeast Asia, and what were the stated rationales for each choice? Second, how have cost-allocation disputes been resolved or deferred in projects that reached financial close, compared with those that stalled at the permitting or regulatory approval stage? Third, what institutional features—such as joint regulatory bodies, treaty-based frameworks, or bilateral investment agreements—appear to reduce the time between technical readiness and regulatory settlement? The scholarly literature on energy regulation has addressed interconnection governance primarily through the lens of European internal energy market integration, with particular attention to the Third Energy Package and its successor, the Clean Energy for All Europeans package. Existing work on regulatory space and transmission investment incentives provides a useful analytical baseline, though this body of scholarship concentrates on alternating current networks and on intra-EU settings where a supranational regulatory layer already exists. HVDC-specific governance has received less systematic treatment: engineering literature addresses converter station design and protection coordination, while policy literature tends to treat HVDC as a delivery mechanism rather than a regulatory object in its own right. The Northeast Asian literature is thinner still. Proposals for a Northeast Asia Super Grid connecting China, Japan, South Korea, and Mongolia have generated feasibility studies and intergovernmental declarations, but comparative regulatory analysis of why these proposals have not advanced beyond pilot scale is sparse. The gap this project addresses is therefore at the intersection of comparative energy regulation and transmission infrastructure governance: a structured comparison of how different institutional arrangements handle the specific coordination problems that HVDC interconnectors create, drawing on cases from both regions to test whether European lessons transfer or whether the absence of a supranational regulatory body produces categorically different dynamics. The study will use structured comparative case analysis across six to eight HVDC interconnector projects drawn from the North Sea offshore grid, the Baltic interconnection programme, and proposed or partially implemented Northeast Asian corridors. Cases will be selected to vary on regulatory model, project outcome, and jurisdictional complexity, following a most-similar systems logic where the technical parameters of the projects are broadly comparable but the governance arrangements differ. Primary data will come from regulatory filings and network development plans published by ENTSO-E, national energy regulators, and equivalent bodies in Japan and South Korea, supplemented by semi-structured interviews with regulatory officials, transmission system operators, and legal advisers involved in specific projects. I anticipate conducting eight to twelve interviews, subject to access. Secondary analysis of feasibility studies, parliamentary committee reports, and academic case studies will situate each project in its political economy context. Analysis will proceed in two stages. The first stage constructs a structured narrative for each case, coding regulatory model, cost-allocation mechanism, dispute resolution pathway, and outcome. The second stage applies a qualitative comparative logic to identify configurations of institutional features that co-occur with durable settlement, drawing on the Boolean minimisation approach associated with comparative case research. This method is appropriate because the number of cases is too small for regression analysis but large enough to move beyond single-case description, and because the research question is configurational rather than correlational. The documentary sources for European cases are publicly accessible without special permissions. Access to Northeast Asian regulatory materials will depend partly on translation from Japanese and Korean; I have intermediate Japanese reading ability and will budget for translation assistance for Korean-language documents. Interview access is the principal contingency: if regulatory officials decline participation, the analysis will rely on documentary sources alone, which is sufficient for the comparative coding stage. No personal data will be collected; interview participants will be professionals acting in institutional capacities, and standard informed-consent and anonymisation procedures will apply. Ethics review will be sought through the relevant Cambridge committee before any interviews are conducted. The proposed timeline distributes work across three terms: the first term covers literature consolidation, case selection, and construction of the coding framework; the second term covers primary document analysis and interview fieldwork; the third term completes the comparative analysis and produces the written thesis. The scope has been deliberately constrained to keep this schedule realistic. The study will produce a comparative account of how regulatory design choices shape the trajectory of cross-border HVDC projects, with particular attention to the conditions under which cost-allocation problems are resolved rather than deferred. If the Northeast Asian cases show that the absence of a supranational regulatory layer produces alternative coordination mechanisms rather than simply a deficit, that finding would qualify the standard European prescription and offer a more differentiated toolkit for policymakers working in bilateral or multilateral settings without treaty-based regulatory authority. The MPhil in Energy Policy at Cambridge provides the regulatory economics and governance training necessary to situate this technically grounded question within a policy research framework. My undergraduate work in power systems and HVDC transmission gives me the technical literacy to read engineering feasibility studies critically and to engage with transmission operators on technical terms; the MPhil would supply the regulatory and institutional frameworks that my engineering training does not. I am particularly interested in working with researchers in the Energy Policy Research Group whose work addresses transmission regulation and infrastructure governance, and I would welcome the opportunity to discuss how this project might connect with ongoing group research on network investment and cross-border coordination.

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